Friday, May 26, 2017

100 word challenge

My Reflection
I have been learning to add detail to my writing.  We had to imagine we were a soldier or a family member and write about this picture.  I used a conclusion to make my writing more interesting.  My next step is to use my 5 senses to add more detail.

2 comments:

Vincent said...

Good boy, vincent!

mummy said...

Good boy, vincent!